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Bonsoir, j'ai écris une lettre en anglais et j'aurais besoin que quelqu'un me corrige.
Je vous remercie d'avance.


I'm a 18 year-old student and I've worked part time since the age of fourteen. I've already worked as a babysitter and paper deliverer ; besides, I've taught other people how to use a computer over the last year.
I've never been waitress but It would be an enriching experience and an opportunity for me to discover the field of the restoration ; so, I could get some work experience in this field.
Moreover, I'm keen and willing to learn : I'm a hard-working person.

For that matter, I love the tea, it's my favourite drink, that's also one of the reasons that I'd like work for you.

In any event, this job would allow me to pay my studies and meet new people. Furthermore, If I must welcome customers , it's not a problem because I'm extremely friendly. I also have communication and organization skills.

Thus, if you would like to meet me you may reach me at 1 453 0307
Thank you for you time and your consideration I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours trusly,
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I'm a 18 year-old student and I've worked part time since the age of fourteen. I've already worked as a babysitter and paper deliverer ; besides, I've taught other people how to use a computer over the last year.
I've never been a waitress but It would be an enriching experience and an opportunity for me to discover the field of the restoration ; so, I could get some work experience in this field. 
Moreover, I'm keen and willing to learn : I'm a hard-working person. 

For that matter, I love tea, it's my favourite drink, that's also one of the reasons that I'd like to work for you. 

In any event, this job would allow me to pay my studies and meet new people. Furthermore, If I must welcome customers , it's not a problem because I'm extremely friendly. I also have communication and organization skills. 

Thus, if you would like to meet me you may reach me at 1 453 0307 
Thank you for your time and your consideration I'm looking forward to hearing from you. 
Yours trusly, 

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