Bonjour, est-ce qu'une âme charitable accepterait de lire et de me préciser mes nombreuses fautes dans mon expression d'anglais s'il vous plait ? Celle-ci entrera dans l'une de mes notions pour mon oral de bac.
Je vous remercie par avance!

What to believe ? Great question.From top of my eighteen years, I still believe in this utopian world, without wars, without poverty, without discrimination… A world where acceptance, love, solidarity would be the key words.

We live in a degrading, pitiful, horrible society… And why ? I don’t know.
Maybe because it’s necessary to make a size 34 to be accepted, and resemble stupidly to each other for get into the norm.
Maybe because we don’t tolerate the difference.
Maybe because priorities have changed and that today buying the latest iPhone is more important than buying to eat.
Maybe because, some people are willing to sacrifice their families in the hope of becoming famous, having money, or simply being loved by others.
It’s dreadfull isn’t it ? Every year that goes by, our society is degrade.

We are in a consumer society, both human and material.
Nowadays, commitment is dead. « Plenty of fish in the sea » they say. Painfully accurate.
Nowadays, it’s easier to order flesh on Tinder than a book on Amazon.
Nowadays, we want to do everything, go everywhere. The rest of the world seems just a few clicks away. The more we look, the more depressed we get.
Nowadays, we can marvel at crowds we’ll never know, a happiness we’ll never own.

All this seems so normal… But it is not ! What makes us believe this, social networks, internet, media, television.
Whereas STOP ! Now, turn off everything and live your life. You will see things become different. Because, maybe we never needed any of this. We came here for connection but we got lost instead. Now it’s over. Together, we’re all going to stop pretending, and thus make evolve our society.