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Yesterday morning, as every year occurred the control of quite nuclear power plant of France. Indeed on January 3rd, 2017, one of the bosses of the power plant of Fessenheim noticed bad maintenance of this one. So, he called up urgently to the Elysee to prevent them of the situation. Some hour later all other power plants noticed the same problem as that of Fessenheim. Some rust installed settled on walls risk of create explosions in the next months. The cut of power plants arose at exactly noon. So, cuts regular of in an overconsumption occurs almost every hour. Today, the public transportation is cut, internet, all the computer system is interrupted as well as all the modes of heating when houses and in companies. The panic of the population begins has to make it feel because without the electricity we can make nothing more neither worked nor we warmed, nor we moved. It will be necessary more of 6 month to restore this dramatic problem. Companies and hospitals are closed and say that they are going all to go bankrupt if this cut continues. The state asked as a matter of urgency for helps of countries neighbor but without answer at the moment. Finally, we advise you of installed urgently panel’s solar energy or wind turbine to resolve the situation in your houses because in some month the price the electricity is going to climb.

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Yesterday morning, as every year occurred the Test of the nuclear power plant of France. Indeed on January 3rd, 2017, one of the leaders of the power plant of Fessenheim noticed bad maintenance of this one. So, he called up urgently to the Elysee to prevent them of the situation. An hour later all other power plants noticed the same problem as that of Fessenheim. Some rust installed settled on walls risk of creating explosions in the next months. The cut of power plants arose at exactly noon. So, cuts regulary of  an overconsumption occurs almost every hour. Today, the public transportation cuts, internet, all the computer system is interrupted as well as all the heating in houses and in companies. The panic of the population begins to make it feel because without the electricity we can make nothing more neither worked nor we warmed, nor we moved. It will be necessary more of 6 month to restore this dramatic problem. Companies and hospitals are closed and say that they are going all to go bankrupt if this cut continues. The state asked as a matter of urgency for helps of neighbour countries  but without an answer at the moment. Finally, we advise you of installation urgently panel’s solar energy or wind turbine to resolve the situation in your houses because in some months the price of electricity is going to increase.
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