Bonjour, je suis en classe de seconde et souhaiterais avoir un avis à propos d'un exercice: le sujet était d'être un proviseur présentant une école à des parents d'élèves cherchant une école en 150 mots:

Dear parents, welcome to Cambridge Elisabeth convent of England, thank you for your interest in our school, it's a mixed secondary school level. I introduce myself, I am the religious who running this convent, Mrs Fitch. We are in more a private school with great women religious who teach a lot of subjects like core subject and philosophy not only but also English, French, German, Spanish, Portuguese, Italian, Polish, Romanian, Czech, Hungarian, and Dutch. The total number of students is 216, which is enouth because in our class there is no more of 16 students, this makes it possible to ensure the quality of studies and students are very closely follow. Thanks to process, they get very good grades, exellent, and we noted that considerable progress had taken place. If it's a school it's also et religious school, so discipline, exelence, politness are needed, indeed, students respects these moral values together with women religious, it's very important for us.
The convent has a girls' boardinf school, and it request wear a uniform, for boys and girls, a Mass is celebrated all week's days.
Certainly, school level is exellent but students are proud of us school.
Our convent is based on supports, exellence, helping each other, it's very important. Mahatma Gandhi once said "A nation's culture resides in the hearts and in the soul of its people" this is a little expression who reflects ideas of our convent.

Please take note that places are limited and that they are reserved quite fast following he reception of the invitations.

My sincerest wishes for your attendance.