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Among all the important American person of the sixties, my choice is Neil Armstrong. I selected this person because I think that walking on the Moon was a great step forward for humanity

On July 20, 1969 at 9 pm, 56 minutes and 20 seconds nearly 600 million people watch, with their eyes riveted on their television screen, astronauts retransmission.

The picture comes alive, one of the cameras taken by Neil Armstrong and Buzz Aldrin begins to retransmit live images of the Moon. Neil Armstrong descends slowly from his rocket in not saying anything, then he pronounces this sentence, which remains famous: "That's one step for man, One giant leap for man-kind.

It is then for me the hope of a new world, on another planet that becomes possible, an absolutely incredible technical.


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Among all the important American person of the sixties, my choice is Neil Armstrong. I selected this person because I think that walking on the Moon was a great step forward for humanity

On July 20, 1969 at 9 pm, 56 minutes and 20 seconds nearly 600 million people watch, with their eyes riveted on their television's screen, the astronauts retransmission.

The picture comes alive, one of the cameras taken by Neil Armstrong and Buzz Aldrin begins to retransmit live images of the Moon. Neil Armstrong descends slowly from his rocket in not saying anything, then he pronounces this sentence, which remains famous: "That's one step for man, One giant leap for man-kind.

It is then for me the hope of a new world, on another planet that becomes possible, an absolutely incredible 

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