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KARIMALLIABDOUVIZ
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Bonjour pouvez-vous me corriger, corriger les phrases et les mots incorrecte et transformés mes phrases si il le faut en phrase plus courante.
Merci.

Sherlock Holmes was born in 1854. From his earliest years, Sherlock realized that he could make a living by using what he saw as a simple pastime: observation and deduction.
Through his memory and wona sense of direction remarkable, he is led to solve inquiries of all kinds sometimes working with the police. Toxicoman at his hours, the young man is also also possesses superior intelligence.
He is also a great brothel and a hardened bachelor, who is very annoyed by the slowness of mind of others.
His career as a detective-consultant began in 1878, when he was only 24 years old. In 1881, he met Doctor Watson who quickly became his right arm by bringing a touch of humanity to the duo.
In 1894, he received the Legion of Honor for the arrest of Huret, the assassin of the boulevards in Paris, but he refused the title of Knight in June 1902.
In reality, Sherlock went into exile in Slovenia to investigate a spy on behalf of Mycroft, his eldest brother, who holds important positions with the British government, and will return to London only three years later.
In 1903, he retired and settled in Sussex where he devoted himself to beekeeping. The date of his death remains unknown. Rumors say he might still be alive.
For several generations, the famous investigator with his double visor cap and his famous replica "Elemental my dear Watson! ", Has become a well-known public figure that we all know.
Indeed, there would be nearly 500 associations in the world, from Europe to Japan through America, who revere sherlock holmes.
Sherlock Holmes quickly gained a mythical statuS.

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FIREGIRL2000VIZ
J'éspére que g bien corrigée. Il n'y avait pas des erreurs. Mias g enlevé et rajouter es trucs. Et parfois g évité les répétitions. Genre "also"

Sherlock Holmes was born in 1854. From his earliest years, Sherlock realized that he could make a living by using what he saw as a simple pastime: observation and deduction.
Through his memory and wona sense of direction remarkable, he is led to solve inquiries of all kinds sometimes working with the police. Toxicoman at his hours, the young man is also possesses superior intelligence.
He is a great brothel and a hardened bachelor, who is very annoyed by the slowness of mind of others.
His career as a detective-consultant began in 1878, when he was only 24 years old. In 1881, he met Doctor Watson who quickly became his right arm by bringing a touch of humanity to the duo.
In 1894, he received the Legion of Honor for the arrest of Huret, the assassin of the boulevards in Paris, but he refused the title of Knight in June 1902.
In reality, Sherlock went into exile in Slovenia to investigate a spy on behalf of Mycroft, his oldest brother, who holds important positions with the British governement, will return to London only three years later.

In 1903, he retired and settled in Suxsess where he devoted himself to beekeeping. The date of his death remains unknown. Rumors say that he might still be alive.
For several generations, the famous investigator with his double visor cap and his famous replica "Elemental my dear Watson! ", Has become a well-known public figure that we all know.
Indeed, there would be nearly 500 associations in the world, from Europe to Japan through America, who revere Sherlock Holmes.
Sherlock Holmes quickly gained a mythical status.
Sherlock Holmes was born in 1854. From his earliest years, Sherlock realized that he could make a living by using what he saw as a simple pastime: observation and deduction.
Through his memory and wona sense of direction remarkable, he is led to solve inquiries of all kinds sometimes working with the police. Toxicoman at his hours, the young man is also possesses superior intelligence.
He is a great brothel and a hardened bachelor, who is very annoyed by the slowness of mind of others.
His career as a detective-consultant began in 1878, when he was only 24 years old. In 1881, he met Doctor Watson who quickly became his right arm by bringing a touch of humanity to the duo.
In 1894, he received the Legion of Honor for the arrest of Huret, the assassin of the boulevards in Paris, but he refused the title of Knight in June 1902.
In reality, Sherlock went into exile in Slovenia to investigate a spy on behalf of Mycroft, his oldest brother, who holds important positions with the British governement, will return to London only three years later.
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