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Bonsoir, pouvez vous corriger mes fautes svp :

If I was given a gap year, I would probably take it off to travel around the world. In my opinion, I think that I could learn more by doing that and it must be more rewarding than sitting in a classroom.
I would like to go to places like Latin America and discover new things, new people, cultures, costums, etc...
It would be a good thing because it would allow me to relieve stress for a year about school work, improve an other language. I could also use that time to find a job overseas and make some extra money for college etc.
However, taking a gap year may have inconvenients : I am afraid that I might loose concentration and willingness to study and might not want to go back to school.
In addition, I might have lots of stuff to do and it would be hard to get used to. And I think I would miss my family and my friends too much.

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ARRIOZZVIZ
En gras le mot corriger ( entre parenthèse la fautes ) Voila ce n'est pas grand chose mais je t'ai trouver cela ;) Bonne continuation !

If I was given a gap year, I would probably take it off to travel around the world. In my opinion, I think that I could learn more by doing that and it must be more rewarding than sitting in a classroom.
I would like to go to places like Latin America and discover new things, new people, cultures, costumes ( costums ), etc...
It would be a good thing because it would allow me to relieve stress for a year about school work, improve another ( Tu l'a mis avec un espace même si je pense que tu n'a pas fait exprès je te le corrige quand même ;) ) language. I could also use that time to find a job overseas and make some extra money for college etc. 
However, taking a gap year may have inconvenienced ( inconvenients ): I am afraid
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