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Bonjouur / POUR DEMAIN/ besoin d'aide pour des phrases en anglais pouvez vous me corrigé (sans site de traduction svp)

1/There are four levels at the high school: freshman,sophomore,junior and senior
Our high school will be constituted by seven buildings

2/Separated from a gigantically beautiful schoolyard! Schoolyard with more benches, tables, fountains and others to have fun between friends

3/The school will be divided into several buildings to facilitate the travel of the students It is a public high school which is accessible to all

4/The students of the high school will begin at 9:30 am and will finish their days at 4 pm in the afternoon ..After the end of the courts the students can participate in extracurricular activities

5/The school is near everything! Fast food restaurants ,shops ,there are buses every hour

6/In the high school will be a big cinema with all the news of the movie to the available poster the place will cost only two dollars and will be accessible to all. There will be also a shop to remember, three pictures booth for immortalized our years high schools.
7/For the sport, is the stadium of the high school will be where of big team were received.
8/The students of the high school will have to respect the teachers and their companion to spend a pleasant year with a good atmosphere.
MERCII


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1) en réalité ce n'est pas seulement high school mais aussi college, mais si la prof t'as dit que c'est seulement high school laisse comme ça
constituted c'est très français je mettrai plutôt formed by (à toi de juger)
2) (si c'est une phrase toute seule elle n'a pas de sens il n'y pas de sujet)
gigantically est un peu bizarre et gigantically beautiful un peu lourd je te conseille de mettre  from a tremendous schoolyard.
Schoolyard with further benches, tables, fountains and more to have fun with  friends (attention between c'est du francais)
3) The school will be divided into several buildings to facilitate the students' travels. It is a public high school, thus it is accessible to everybody.
4) 
The pupils (students of the high school c'est une redondance lourde) will begin at 9:30 am and will finish their classes at 4 pm in the afternoon. After the end of the lessons (courts ne se dit pas), the students can practice extracurricular activities.
5) 
The school is near everything: fast food restaurants, shops , and there are even buses every hour!
6) (phrase un peu confue et pas claire) 
At 
the high school, there will be a marvellous cinema accessible to everybody, and it will cost only two dollars. (je n'ai pas bien compris ce qui était écrit au milieu désolé). Furthermore, there will be  (sache qu'on dit there will also be) a special souvenir shop and three photo booths to immortalize our high school times.
7/ Regarding sports, there is a real high school stadium for our pupils that will also enable us to welcome other big teams. 
8/The students of the high school will obviously have to respect the teachers and their classmates so as to spend an enjoyable year in a positive atmosphere.

(attention tu as tendence à traduire du français à l'anglais. Le secret c'est d'essayer de penser et d'organiser tes idées en anglais afin d'avoir l'air anglais(e) )

bon travail