Bonsoir,

J'ai réalisé une histoire en anglais et j'aimerai qu'on m'en corrige une partie si certaines choses ne vont pas. Merci.

Voici l'histoire :

Estrellas waked up a day of fine morning, and as is her custom, after taking breakfast, she moved towards her personal library. All the same, she heard a conversation (tenue par) her parents in the living-room by the way, who intrigued her. Indeed, her father wanted to find a future heir to succeed him, because he had no son, what was bothering him for the future of the castle and the kingdom. In her library, Estrellas were thinking about it. She trought that she was able to (gouverner). So, she wanted to proove to her parents, espaccially to her father that she could inherit those. So, she decided to tram the Dragon, like the knights, because indeed, her father decided to test all the knights, so that to choose the one who would come to tram the beast. Then, she conceived a plan. After hearing the existence of the magician who knew the Dragon's land, she decided to contact him, in order to get some information about the beast. Problem. She didn't know who find the magician. However, she had observed her father who taked a place where she had never been, it was forbidden for her. She trought that the magician must have positioned himself over there, in this secret place of the castle, and her father knew him so well ! So, she went to meet him taking this place forbid by trying to not to be seen by her parents. Then, she found him, and she asked him where is the Dragon by explaining him the reason of this. He didn't want to answer her because he considered that she wasn't able to tram the Dragon and it was too dangerous for her. Furthermore, he didn't want to get in trouble with her father, a good friend according to him. But she begged him, begged, begged, she was very unstoppable and relentless. So, he gave away to its desire and made her part of the magic formula to enter in the dark forest, where was the Dragon. Then, she went in her room and wore his uniform of horsewoman (she rode horses), and she went back to the wizard in the night. This later sent her in the forest, in front of the transparent barrier, thanks to his magic filter. She recited formula, and penetred in. The place is really darkness, with fire everywhere. She saw big footsteps on the viscous sol and runned this, determined. She arrived in front of a kind of grotto. He was here. So, she entered by paying extremely attention..