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Qui peut me corriger un texte en anglais svp voici le texte: The food is a primary element for the body. She divides in 2 category the "unhealthy eating" and the " good food ". In the first place, the unhealthy eating is a fatal food for the human body however numerous are the young people who consume it for are prices little expensive, that speed and its taste while it entails many risks as the diabetes and the obesity. Secondly, the healthy food is a balanced diet with food bold weak.She favors the digestion, warns the diseases as the cardiovascular diseases or the cancer and improves her even psychic and physical health. The Good nutrition is only beneficial for us!

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She c'est pour une fille ou une femme. Seulement pour les humains.

La nourriture on va dire "It" comme pour les animaux.

Ex : This dogme is very nice, it is mine. Its games are bought by me.
Food is a primary element for body. It is divided in 2 categories : the "unhealthy eating" and the " good food ". In the first place, unhealthy eating is fatal for the human body however numerous are the young people who consume it for are prices little expensive, that speed [je comprends pas trop le sens que t’as voulu donner à ton début de phrase] and its taste while it entails many risks as the diabetes and the obesity. Secondly, healthy food is a balanced diet with food bold weak. It favors the digestion, warns the cardiovascular diseases or the cancer and improves psychic and physical health.
[j’ai essayé de te corriger mais certaines de tes phrases sont tournées vraiment bizarrement ]