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Bonjour je suis en terminale. j'ai une petite question est ce que si un bilingue( ou niveau d'anges tout a fait correcte) passe par là il pourrait me dire ce qu'il pense de mon oral de bac sur le progrès, je ne vous demande pas de le corriger juste de me dire ce que vous en penser appart si vraiment une faute énorme vous saute aux yeux, merci et bonnes années !

The notion I am going to deal with is entitled : “ idea of progress”. First of all the progress is improvement or a development, we can say that it is a forward mouvement too. Today we are going to analyze to what extent the conquest of space has an impact on our society. Actually the NASA has considerably progressed. Let us weigh, first the origine of this origine, i’m mean the beginning of all this scientific revolution, after the drawbacks and then maybe a solution for our future.

The space race was the name of “the competition “ between 2 cold war rivals: USA and USSR. This Space Race began in 1955, when the USSR declared on August 2nd that they would send a satellite into the space on a near future, while the USA has said 4 days earlier that they would lunch in 1957 a satellite for the first time.However, the peak of the conquest of space was finished by the Americans, when Neil Armstrong became the first man to walk on the moon in 1969. Furthermore, we studied a document called “ Astronaut saluting the american flag on the moon” during this gesture the astronaut said “ that one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind”. This gesture symbolizes a real positive development of the sciences. It was a scientific revolution, and the beginning of many spaces trips. Days after days a lot of a new planets are discovered. There are thousand men who work on this estate and this why a scientist often needs to make Grandes Ecoles and studied more than 7 years at university.

Unlikely, this development has few drawbacks. Sciences progress yes! But at what cost?
Actually, the closest planet is at 210 millions of kilometer, so it is very complicated to go to another planet. Indeed the cost to send a satellite of these territories is considerable. For example, we worked on a document called “ one way ticket to mars” and as we can see “ one-way” means never come back. That is one of our dilemmas. We must find people who want to dead for sciences and especially who agree to pay a ticket between 2 and 10 billions dollars. So If we add finances used to build the satellite and the food for the 4 mouth’s travel: it’s unbelievable! On the twenty first century our principal issue is the sustainable development. Of course it is expensive but we can find money to go to mars, on the other hand protect the nature is essential. Soon it will be too late. And this estate is the worst kind of progress. As we can see on our society the progresses have some negatives sides too.The sustainable development should be more highlight and should have a statue more influenceable. Send a satellite to the space pollute a lot. For example, when a rocket is sent to the space the smoke rejected content many toxics substances.
So let us recap the 3 principals’ problems : the price, the pollution cause by a mission, and the time demanding to get results. This 3 things show how progress can breed default.

As against all this drawbacks, it is easy to say that the conquest of space is a solution at all our colonization problems, jobs issue, simply space missing, or pollution problems. As far as “ one way ticket to mars” is concerned, this interesting document-listening thought us that scientist thinking of sending people to mars like ‘a colonization’ . This mission is called “the hundred year’s starship”. It is true to say that if a new life planet is discovered and if people can live on this territories, a considerable progress can breed a new future. In two thousand and fifty they will have more than 9 billions of humans on our Earth ad even if it is seems full of implausibility a second planet could be a solution.

To conclude, the conquest of space symbolize an amazing progress because thanks to these discovers we have learn plenty regarding to the functioning of the space and maybe a solution for our future.