Bonjour j'aurais besoin que vous corrigiez mon devoir en anglais s'il vous plait ...

Le voici:

During my holidays, I did a lot of things.
On the firs day of the holidays, I went to the cinema with my friends atch an adventure movie: it was really good ! Then we went to a restaurant , it was delicious despite the weather, it was rain. We had a lot of fun. The next day, I spent the Christmas Eve with my family and my grandma, I was cold. I enjoyed this Christmas family even if the magic of christmas is not too munch for me. After christmas stayed at home watch tv and read my books. The 31st I celebrated the last day of 2017 and at midnight I said "hello" to 2018, it was wonderful all this is fireworks in this clear New year's sky. I sacrified the last five days too my school work.



Au passage BONNE ANNÉE à ceux qui me corrige!!! Merci d'avance .