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Bonjour,
je voudrais savoir si j'ai des fautes sur ce texte s'il vous plait.
Merci

In 2012, 900 million trees were transformed paper, 18 % of gas emission came from the industry of beef, 38 % of drivers moved in cars every morning while they could simply make some ride sharing to reduce the emission of Co2, on 500 billion plastic bags only 3 % were recycled.
It is necessary to act! it to change our habits!
Small details can protect our planet, for example: instead of using some virgin paper we shall use some recycled paper, if we become vegetarian we shall reduce 14 tons of CO2 of the atmosphere, recycle plastics bags…
If we continue like that, we are going to make of the earth a vast trash can, there will be millions of species which are going to disappear, we shall make of the earth for us children in sad, grey and intolerable places.

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PIRATEKAYAKVIZ
In 2012, 900 million trees were being transformed into paper, 18 % of gas emission came from the beef industry, 38 % of drivers moved in individual cars every morning while they could simply ride with a friend to reduce the emission of Co2, and on 500 billion plastic bags only 3 % were recycled.
It is necessary to act and change our habits! 
Small details can protect our planet, for example: instead of using virgin paper we could use recycled paper, also if we become vegetarian we could reduce 14 tons of CO2 of the atmosphere, we could as well recycle plastics bags…
If we continue like we are, we are going to make of the earth a huge trash can. There will be millions of species which will disappear, we will make the earth a sad, grey and intolerable place for our children.
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