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Bjr je dois décrire my ideal city pouvait me dire si c'est juste et préciser le numéro de la ligne ou faitre un copier coller et me corriger mes erreurs merci d'avance;
My ideal city would be located near the sea. The beach would be very wide and the sea water would be transparent ,there would be no rocks, no jellyfishes and no shark attacks at the seaside, like this, we could swim and enjoy to the sea without danger. There would almost always sun and it would do hot .In front of the sea on the cliffs , there would a small forest with very tall fir-trees with a path who would lead to the city center.It would be the place ideal where we could have fun ,( hanging out with our friends), study ..., because there would night clubs, a stadium, a theatre, a cinema,a big library for to read many books and be cultivated, restaurants ( for gather with friends or families and share a good meal), and the best universities (like this, everyone will have a good university degree).My ideal city would be also litter-free , and no poverty (because there would shelters and nice homes for everyone,free internet for everybody) , with facilities to keep kids ,a green system of transports , (no-polluting transport) ,a medical center, a minimal law enforcement ,because there would a peaceful atmosphere (there would have no violence, no racism and no discrimination and so, nobody would want destroy this atmosphere). So , it's like this that I imagine " my ideal city ".

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My ideal city would be located near the sea. The beach would be very wide and the sea water would be transparent. Moreover, there would be no rocks, no jellyfishes and no shark attacks at the seaside, thus we could swim and enjoy the sea without danger. Furthermore, it would almost always be sunny and it would be warm. In front of the sea, on the cliffs, there would be a small forest with very tall fir-trees with a path which would lead to the city center. It would actually be the ideal place where we could have fun,( hanging out with our friends), study ..., and there would be night clubs, a stadium, a theatre, a cinema, a big library to read lots of books and to be cultivated, restaurants (to gather with friends or families and share a good meal), and the best universities (like this, everyone would have a good university degree). In fact, my ideal city would also be litter-free , without poverty (because there would be shelters and nice homes for everyone,free internet for everybody) , with facilities to keep kids ,a green system of transports , (no-polluting transport) ,a medical center, a minimal law enforcement ,and there would a peaceful atmosphere (there would exist no violence, no racism and no discrimination and so, nobody would want to destroy this atmosphere). So , it's like this that I imagine " my ideal city ".

Jai corrigé qq petites erreurs et j'ai rajouté des mots de liaison

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