Bonjour, moi c'est Pierre :) et je suis en 3em j'aurais besoin d'aide pour ma redaction en anglais de 150 sur le thème de l'horreur possible de me la corriger au Passe et de me l'ameliorer car j'ai un trou pour la fin tout en m'expliquant
Ps: Je suis loin d^'etre le meilleur en anglais :D
Monday/07:29 , it's me Lucas...
i write this story beaucause im arrived something horrible, very horrible !
Yesterday my mom went to call to me and she said " I want that kept silent kind I am going to register you on the campsite" and i said " Yes of course, no problem"im not so enjoyed to go at the campsite but i like the nature and the animals so is good opportunity for my control in SVT
Wednesday / 9:31 , Sorry on tuesday had no time for write my personal book, so this day is day to go at the campsite im very stressed beaucause ma my mom don't come with me is the first time ! i hope meet a lot of friends
Wednesday / 12:45, Ok so, im in a tent of campsite is very little but, i have get acquainted of Carla is a beautiful girl she have a long blond hair and a very blue eyes shes very amazing ! the teacher went to create 7 group for a treasure quest i hope im in the group 4 because Carla is in.
Wednesday / 13:28 , The quest start im with carla, Pierre and Lucas i love my group, Pierre have a short black hair and have a dark skinned, Lucas looked like Carla in a boy :D
Wednesday / 15:45, Im in a forest with Carla and Lucas, but Pierre is not with the group im very affraid,
-Carla : Pierre where are you ! Pierre ! Pierre !
- Lucas : Eh Ooh Pierre come on !
Suddenly we heard one screams all the group is disturbed