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bonjour, je suis en 4 eme et j'aimerais juste savoir si mon texte en anglais est juste ;)
merci pour le temps que vous y consacrerez ....

When I get there I'll do a lot of things
On saturday morning , I will cross on foot Brooklyn Bridge for take grat photo of the view
I'll have lunch at "river café" in the afternoon,I will visit the memorial of the World trade center , hat a bad memory !
I will go in a hotel for sleep and eat
If the weather is good on sunday , I will go to Coney Island for fun in the parks.
I hope it's going to be as great as W.D.C,I went there last summer and it was amazing.
I had visited the Capitol
the dome is one of the most spectacular in elements of the Capitol.
I visited Washington monument and a museum of air and space it was the most impressive museum
I walked along the '' Mall"
I went to shops there are the most beautiful clothes in the world have you already been to Washington D.C

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NATHEAVIZ
bonjour

When I get there I'll do a lot of things.
On Saturday morning I will  walk across the Brooklin Bridge to take great pictures of the view.
I'll have lunch at the River Cafe. Then, in the afternoon, I will visit the memorial of the World Trade Center. What a bad memory ! (ou What a bad day that was !)
I will go to the hotel to have dinner and sleep.
If the weather is nice on Sunday, I will go to Coney Island to have fun in the amusement park.
I hope this is going to be as great (as fantastic...pour pas répéter "great"..)
as W.D.C. (??? c'est quoi ??? peut être vaut mieuc l'écrire en entier..)
OHHHHHH tu veux dire Washington D.C.  (?????)alors il faut écrire 
as fantastic as Washington D.C. I went there last summer and it was amazing. I visted the Capitol. The most spectacular element of this building is the dome. I also visited several other monuments and the National Air and Space Museum. It was the most impressive museum I have ever seen !
I walked around the National Mall.
I went shopping too. You can find there the most beautiful clothes of the world.
Have you already been to Washington D.C. ?

PS = le National Mall est un parc...donc pour dire je me suis promené = I walked around... (to walk along = to walk along the streets, par exemple..)

N'oublie pas les majuscules pour Saturday et Sunday et pour les noms en général comme the River Cafe  ("e" et pas "é" ...)

voilà.. je ne dis pas que c'est zéro faute, mais un peu mieux quand même !!

bonne nuit /journée :)

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