bonsoir
Last night the school was robbed. Some supplies were taken. A window was broken. A television and two computers were stolen. Finally, all the final exam papers were photocopied.
Every day the children are woken up by my mother. They are driven to school. Differents subjects are learnt (ou learned = les 2 sont acceptés) there. Exams are taken once a week. Their favorite sport, soccer, is played on Fridays.
A package holiday to Hawaii was sent to me by my fiancé. It was taken to my hotel by the representative. After days we met for our anniversary to be celebrated. We were invited some coktails on the beach by the representative. Delicious meals were prepared. The meals were prepared with finest ingredients by the best chefs in the region.
(je n'ai pas mis "we met" au passif, cela me semble bizarre, mais la phrase infinitive, oui.)
Dernier paragraphe, tu as mis "was" dans la marge ?? Pourquoi ? Le texte est au présent. Je garde le présent... si tu veux le mettre au prétérit je te mets l'auxiliaire au prétérit entre (..).
Popcorn is (was) often prepared by my sister. Perfect popcorn is (was) easy to be made. The instructions are to be followed well. Three tablespoons of oil are (were) put in a large pot and the pot is (was) placed on the stove. The oil is (was) heated on a high flame. Next a quarter cup of popcorn is (was) added into the pot and a lid is (was) put on it. In the next stage, the flame is reduced and the pot is (was) gently shaken until the popcorn is (was)popped.
Then the pot is (was) removed from the stove which is turned off. Finally the popcorn is put into a large bowl.
voilà. Je te rappelle juste que le complément d'agent (by ???) ne se met que s'il est très précis. On ne dit pas "by people", "by them" by someone" etc..
J'ai choisi de ne pas le mettre dans le dernier paragraphe : "par elle" "by her".....On sait au début que c'est "my sister". Ensuite on dit que les instructions doivent être bien suivies. Si on rajoute "by her" à chaque fois pour "she", le texte devient lourd....
J'espère que cela te conviendra.
Bonne nuit / journée :)
