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Bonsoir pouvez vous me corriger mon texte en anglais s'il vous plait ? Merci



From April 9th ​​to April 13th, 2018, I did an training period with medical group located in Nante During this training period, I was interested in the world of work.

I did it in a health center because health has interested me for a long time.

As far as i am concerned I was hoping to discover many professions related to health, which I did not necessarily know.

This medical group was founded in 1987. This structure responds to the needs of the local population who can consult a general practitioner, osteopath, dentist, chiropodist, physiotherapist, midwife and nurse on site or at home on appointment ; from 8h30 to 19h and often more.

As there are many jobs within this center, I enjoyed to able to observe more than one profession.

This is how I realized that it can be very interesting to study the relationships between the different members of this medical o


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Bonjour, donc voici le texte corrigé:

"From April 9th ​​to April 13th, 2018, I did a training period with a medical group located in Nante. During this training period, I was interested in the world of work.

I did it in a health center because this field has captivated me for a long time.

As far as i am concerned, I was hoping to discover many health-related professions which I did not previously know about.

This medical group was founded in 1987. Its structure responds to the needs of the local population who can consult a general practitioner, osteopath, dentist, chiropodist, physiotherapist, midwife and nurse on site or at home on appointment ; from 8h30 to 19h and often more.

As there are numerous jobs within this center, I enjoyed to be able to observe many of them. "

En ce qui concerne le dernier paragraphe, il est pas complet donc j'ai pas pu corriger. (mais ce qui est ecrit déja dans la partie du dernier paragraphe est correcte).

Bonne continuation :)), si ma réponse vous a satisfait svp nottez moi comme meilleur réponse! :)
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