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1. vous êtes le dirigeant d'une entreprise. votre entreprise est au bord de la faillite: expliquez les raisons et proposez des solutions pour la sauver

The company mainly manufactures luxury leather goods and ready-to-wear business is in bankruptcy because now there is competition that is all that cheaper because of it we have less command but also that the matter that we use a lot to increase also now that customers want to go on the internet but we do not have a website and that's because we have less control and also we do a lot of quality that is too expensive so that the company is no longer in bankruptcy we have to make changes open a website that customers can easily commend to take another raw material of good quality and cheaper and manufactured more attractive product against the competition and make small gifts that will return the customers and remove some posts that is useless