👤

bonsoir j'aurai besoin de votre aide est ce que quelqu'un ayant un bon niveau d'anglais pourrait me corriger mes fautes et de me dire si mes phrases on bien un sens que globalement si c'est compréhensible silvouplait ne répondez pas si vous savez pas c'est un travail sérieux
merci d'avance

Mom,

I write you this letter after my discovery; I was conceived naturally. you lied to me all my life without feeling guilty about the consequences that could have on me. I feel betrayed by your silence, I do not understand your decision to you and my father. Why did you make that choice? Why not an artificial design? All the people around me have been designed in this way. And they live so much better! I feel so alone, no one will be able to understand what I am living, to undergo daily. When I walk down the street I feel all eyes fixed on me and her for years. In a way, I do not belong to this society. Why complicate my life when you could have made it normal, easier and better My friends all have a perfect appearance with blue eyes, blond hair in a large and beautiful dream body . They have all the physical capabilities, such as a sportsman. As if all this were not enough they are so intelligent at all levels, they can remember a lot of extraordinary information in memory while I have to review, work hours in order to master my lesson perfectly, mom, you know how I strive to succeed. They will return very easily to the University of their Choice Will easily access a position full of good future a remuneration
a future all traced. A life with their spouse, their child and all this without making the least effort. they are fortunate to be able to pass on all these qualities to their children, who will do the same. For short, the people around me are happy while I am not. I feel tired of having to fight against "perfect" people to make my life better. I'm beyond myself, so that I could have their level from birth. Say it's your choice! I am forced to undergo a shabby life in the face of a totally different life makes me mad with contempt. Should not parents want the Best for their children? When I confronts their eyes with their questions I understand that I am absolutely not at the same level as them.
I hope that now you realize the consequences of the selfish decision you made I am so unhappy! I can’t forgive you for what you did to me

Your daugther ,


Répondre :

I wrote you this letter after my discovery.

I do not understand the decision you made with my father.

All my friends have a perfect appearance with blue eyes, blond hair with a beautiful dream body.

(Efface "such as a sportsman")

Merci d'avoir visité notre site Web, qui traite d'environ Anglais. Nous espérons que les informations partagées vous ont été utiles. N'hésitez pas à nous contacter pour toute question ou demande d'assistance. À bientôt, et pensez à ajouter ce site à vos favoris !


Viz Asking: D'autres questions