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bonsoir, j'ai une production en anglais sur "your expectations for your life after the brevet exam : If you get it and if you fail it"
j'ai rédigé un simple paragraphe "idées principales". je veux une petite aide sur l'introduction svp et la fin, et beaucoup d'améliorations svp.

introduction je veux dire qu'avoir mon brevet est un grand rêve qui va se réaliser bientôt mais je sais pas comment le dire.


«I am in the last year of the middle school and I'll pass my brevet exam as soon as the year finishes. If I get it with high grades, I'll start my studies in the secondary school and study there for three years. As I prefer scientific subjects, I'll opt for a scientific stream.
by the end of the secondary (education? school? what do we say please?), I'll have the baccalaureate exam, and then I'll move to the university. when I'll graduate from there, I'll get a nice job and start working. then, I will start thinking about a family life.
but if I fail it, I will be very sad and cry a lot, and surely, i will pass a very bad holidays. but it won't be the end. I will retry again and work hard until I get it, it will be the realisation of a dream of life.

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for me,to succeed in my brevet exam is a big dream that i hope it will be real very soon.
i'm a pupil in middle school the last year and i have an exam waiting for me at the end of this year .i'll do my best to have high grades and succeed in my brevet exam .if i get good marks ,i'll opt for scientific stream and focus on my studies during the high school and make choices that will influence the rest of my life .if i get my baccalaureate,i'll go to the university to finish my studies there . as soon as i have my diploma , i plan to get a nice job and enjoy my life with my family . but if i fail in it ,i'll be very sad and have a hard time after that ,i'll cry a lot . honestly i can't imagine myself in that situation but it won't be the end for me because i won't give up for sure . i'll make sure that i'll retry again and get it with a high grade .
as you can see , i have big plans for my future , i hope i make something of myself as they say :"if you can imagine it, you can achieve it , if you can dream it , you can become it " . c'est trop long mais j'ai beaucoup d'idées
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