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Bonjour j'ai fais une lettre de motivation en anglais pourriez vous me corrigez si j'ai fais une faute s'il vous plait :
Dear Ms. AYALA


I am writing to apply for the position of baby-sitter because your requirements are closely parallel to my skills, interests and experiences.

I am eighteen years old and in my final year at secondary school. I plan to study at university at New York University (NYU). I have 5 months hands-on experience as a babysitter with different families of New York, I would be able to develop and nourish your children effectively and I am a dynamic, reliable and serious person. Contact with children is also the main motivation for me to apply to you. I am well-versed in taking care of children for a few hours when parents are at or away from the home.

Indeed, my relevant expertise includes: preparing and providing meals to the children, accompanying them on outings, and keeping them amused. Moreover, I am also skilled in preparing bottles and changing diapers of infants. Above all, I know how to keep the kids safe and amused in different healthy ways.I am really good at following parents's instructions and following through with bedtimes, making meals and helping kids with homework. I love babysitting and enjoy talking and playing games while I babysit kids.

I hope I have shown that I am a suitable candidate for this position. Thank you for your time and consideration.


I look forward to hearing from you


Yours faithfully.

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Voici la correction :

Dear Ms. AYALA

I am writing to apply for the position of baby-sitter because your requirements are closely parallel to my skills, interests and experiences.

I am eighteen years old and in my final year at secondary school. I have planned to study at university at New York University (NYU). I have 5 months hands-on experience as a babysitter with different families of New York, I would be able to develop and nourish your children effectively and I am a dynamic, reliable and serious person. Contact with children is also the main motivation for me to apply to you. I am well-versed in taking care of children for a few hours when parents are at or away from the home.

Indeed, my relevant expertise includes: preparing and providing meals to the children, take them out, and keeping them amused. Moreover, I am also skilled in preparing bottles and changing diapers of infants. Above all, I know how to keep the kids safe and amused in different healthy ways.I am really good at following parents's instructions and following through with bedtimes, making meals and helping kids with homework. I love babysitting and enjoy talking and playing games while I babysit kids.

I hope I have shown that I am a suitable candidate for this position. Thank you for your time and consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours faithfully.

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