Réponse :
bonjour,
Alors je suis à votre disposition pour vous aider.
Economic inequalities
but the educational system and there are a lot of inequalities in the United States ( éviter les abbréviations ) and the world. Today, the average cost ( le prix moyen ) of universities is approximatively 26 000 dollars therefore not everyone gets the chance to enter.
When you want to go to university, you can't imagine how much money it represents for the lower or the middle class. After finishing your studying years, you end up having debts and will have to pay for a very long period of time. In the United States, 40% of adults are still paying their university and college debts.
Although entering university can be painful economically, the degree remains an instrument of power and a lot of people want to study, you can hope to have a job.
2) Doc : speech Obama
Despite all of this, Obama explains that "there is no excuse for not trying"
He started from nothing. When this man was young, he lived in Indonesia and didn't go to school in the United States because his family didn't have money.
With the power of his speech, Obama shows students that nothing is impossible when you do your best.
Social inequalities
Malala's story also reveals social inequalities in the scholar system.
Indeed, in her country, girls can't go to school. Malala wants to become a doctor and fought for girls' education her whole life.
Pakistan is a country where the power and individual freedom is very limited and scarce. Thus fighting against such a tough country displays how much Malala is an icon of bravery and determination.
Conclusion :
School is a powerful tool but unfortunately a lot of people have limited access to it. Indeed, this poxer can be very limited and access to the scholar system is reduced. Thanks to school, people get the opportunity to climb the social ladder.
Explications :
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J'espère avoir été utile,
