Bonsoir,
Tous les "i" doivent être capitalisés.
"Hello,
[...] fourteen ( pas forteen ) years old, and I'm a teenager.
[...] I practice the ( pas de "the") musculation, it's my hobbies. ( Comme c'est au pluriel, tu dois rajouter au moins un de tes loisirs ).
I also love to help people. I'm serious and attentive.
If you elect ( pas de e ) I would ( pas will ) put distributors and benches through the HighSchool and expand corridors.
I propose the ideas ( il y a 2 idées ) of having 2 hours to eat and to add more plugs in the establishment to recharge our phone's battery.
If I was the class president, I would help you to find solutions for your problems.
I want to represent my class and to defend its concepts.
Ce qui donne:
"Hello,
My name is Anna, I am fourteen years old and I'm a teenager. I live in Roisel. I'm friendly, hard-working, honest but I'm clumsy and a bit shy. I practice musculation and... ( mets un autre loisir ici ), that are my hobbies. I also love to help people. I'm serious and attentive.
If you elect me, I would put distributors and benches through the HighSchool and expand corridors. I also propose the ideas of having 2 hours to eat and to add more plugs in the establishment to recharge our phone's battery.
If I was the class president, I would help you to find solutions for your problems. I want to represent my class and to defend its concepts."
Bonne chance!
