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CELINE1704VIZ
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Bonjour, pouvez-vous corriger mon pararagraphe en anglais s'il vous plaît. Il faut écrire un texte sur Charlotte.
Voici le texte:

This is an America assistant. Her name is Charlotte. She is 22 years old. She lives in California. She is a big fan of RNB music. She studies at the University of Sarah Laurence College in New York. It is not her first that she comes to France , but this is the second time she comes. She enjoys coming to France. She is crazy about French, Mexico, Vietnam, Thai , India and Japenese food, so she likes all the food in the world. Her brother's name is Noyan. Her dog name is Karabash. Her favorite museum in France is the Picasso museum. She enjoys traveling to discover the cultures of the countries and has traveled to Thailand, Mexico, and many other countries.

Je vous remercie d'avance . niveau 3ème

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SARAHSLGVIZ

Bonjour,

This is an America assistant. Her name is Charlotte. She is 22 years old. She lives in California. She is a big fan of RNB music. She studies at the University of Sarah Laurence College in New York. This is not her first time she comes to France, but it's the second time she comes. She enjoys coming to France. She is crazy about French, Mexico, Vietnam, Thai , India and Japenese food, so she likes all the food in the world. Her brother's name is Noyan. Her dog name is Karabash. Her favorite museum in France is the Picasso museum. She enjoys travelling to discover the cultures of the countries and has traveled to Thailand, Mexico, and many other countries.

Au lieu de tout l’temps répéter « she » tu devrais mettre charlotte ou this girl etc

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