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J'ai fait une lettre en anglais pouvez-vous me corrigé mes fautes d'anglais svp

Mister the Judge,
It is from now on official: there was and there still exists, a Generation
stolen to Australia.
I am Bruce Treverrow, I am an aboriginal, a member of the stolen
generation which reached all the stages and proved that it was removed
without the assent of his parents and an illegal way. I believe being well
placed to affirm that to remove a child with his family in these
circumstances constituted an abusive imprisonment and a lack of the State
to its duty of protection of the citizens. Moreover I ask at the Australian
State to pay a nap which will enable me to refund my real loan, obviously
that will not replace the relative whom I lost. I live Bairnsdale, since my
more young age I suffer from chronic depression, during this childhood I
was not entitled to an exceptional life as could have had a normal child,
this pain, this vacuum which I have in me and which prevented me a long
time from advancing in the life but now I ask you to take account of the
evil that you had generates during the stolen generation. I did not have
maternal love is that destroyed me internally, I was not supported and nor
reassures that costs me today. Thank you to speak account otherwise and
not to be a man among such an amount of other.
Bruce TREVARROW,
August 2007


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Ton texte est bon sauf a coté de i was not supported and "not". Tu as mis nor mais je sais que c'est simplement une faute de frappe