Oral /Idea of progress

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The notion of progress
Intro :
I’m going to talk about « Idea of progress ». To begin with, I’d like to state a definition of progress. Progress is the idea that the world and the society can evolve in therms of sciences, technology, modernization, living condition, etc. However, the idea of progress is still debate between those who consider that it’s beneficial and those for whom it’s harmful.
Now, I propose we look at a question: « Should we fear progress? »
To answer this question, we will start by Technical progress after scientific progress and finally social progress.
I. Technical progress
First of all, I think progress is essential to evolve. History is made of progress and evolution that have allowed the world to be what it’s today. For example, in the article “The big money”, the narrator speaks of Henry FORD because it has revolutionized the world with his first car “Model T” in 1909.
II. Scientific progress
Scientific progress can be good or bad because in a cartoon we can look runners failing into syringe because they are doped. Doping is very dangerous for health and they take this for more performance. Athlete can become addicted for example Marco Pantani (a cycling climber).
But the scientific progress can be good for example for example vaccination allowed protecting themselves from some disease. Over time they have become stronger and more diversified.
II. Social progress
Over times, the mentality of people has changed. Before, black person were rejected by white person. Different groups were created to humiliate black personne for example a Klu Klux Klan. In the film, “Mississippi Burning” made in 1988 by Alan Parker. It’s three activists for civil rights blacks mysteriously disappear. These are two FBI agents who are assigned to the case. Very soon, the questions and methods of intimidation Alan Ward and Rupert Anderson bother, especially Klu Klux Klan. Today racism is moin important with a black president in USA, but still present for example March 12, Dani Alves, soccer player, a supporter of the opposing team throws a banana.
Conclusion:
To conclude, the man makes many advances in many fields such as medicine or technology. On the other side, there are not those good progresses, there are some that abyss health (drug), on the other that can remove life (weapons) but some progress improves life as the many advances in medicine (vaccination) and technology (television).