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Oral bac anglais - notion Myths and Heroes

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I am going to present to you the notion « Myths and Heroes ».Let me first define the notion.The myths aims to recount the exploints of being fabulous, heroes, through legendary stories.The hero is the person who is distinguished by his courage and who is admired by his people. We are thus entitled to wonder :Wich have to be the hero's value? To approach this question,I am going to take the case of Martin Luther King. So I am going to develop my opinion through three points: First of all we shall see who is MKL then we shall speak about this action and his distinction and we shall eventually speak about the movie Selma.
I am going to beginby presenting you Martin Luther King Junior. King was born on January 15th, 1929 in Atlanta, Georgia. By his activism, he played a determining role in ending the legal segregation of Afro-American citizens in the South as well as the creation of Civil Rights Act of 1964 and Voting Rights Act of 1965. King was murdered in April 1968.
In spite of the charges of tax fraud, embezzlement and in spite of the threats which pressed on him and on his family, King knew mark the America 's history and is recognized as a hero today. In the United States, the memory of Martin Luther King is honored by monuments, parks, street end even by holyday. Since 1986, indeed, King entered in the pantheon of the America's heroes.
Now I am going to present you thus Selma. This one is an American movie realized by Ava Duvernay, brought out in 2014. The movie tells,that in 1964, while the tensions rise, King and his partners decide to realize walking from Selma to Mongomery. They have to deal with the violence of the local police force, managed by sheriff Jim Clark and by governor George Wallace. King is interpreted by David Oyelowo. This movie allows the new generation to rediscover this man who by his convictions became the hero of a whole population.
In conclusion, Martin Luther King is the example of the realistic hero standing out by his oratical strenght and his speeches fighting against the causes of the racial segregation. His dream is realized during the election of Barack Obama, first black president of the United States, who joins in the lineage of the progress of the racial question in America. Beside as the British Prime Minister and novelist, Benjamin Disraeli :"The legacy of heroes is the memory of a great name and the inheritance of a great example".


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I am going to present to you the notion « Myths and Heroes »(use quotation marks"").Let me first define notion.The myths aims to recount the exploits of being fabulous, heroes, through legendary stories.The hero is the(a) person who is distinguished by his courage and who is admired by his people. We are thus entitled to wonder :Wich have to be the hero's value? rearrange to bring better meaning To approach this question,I am going to take the case of Martin Luther King.I am going to develop my opinion through three points: First of all we shall see who is MKL(write full name) then we shall speak about this action and his distinction and we shall eventually speak about the movie Selma.
I am going to begin by presenting to you Martin Luther King Junior. King was born on January 15th, 1929 in Atlanta, Georgia. By(through) his activism, he played a determining role in ending the legal segregation of Afro-American citizens in the South as well as the creation of Civil Rights Act of 1964 and Voting Rights Act of 1965. King was murdered in April 1968.
In spite of the charges of tax fraud, embezzlement and in spite of the threats which pressed on him and on his family, King made a mark on  America 's history and is recognized as a hero today. In the United States, the memory of Martin Luther King is honored by monuments, parks, street end even with an holiday. Since 1986, indeed, King entered in the pantheon of the America's heroes.
Now I am going to present you thus Selma. This one is an American movie realized by Ava Duvernay, brought out (released) in 2014. The movie tells,that (talks of the events that took place) in 1964, while the tensions rise, King and his partners decide to realize walking from Selma to Montgomery. They have to deal with the violence from the local police force managed by sheriff Jim Clark and by governor George Wallace. King is interpreted by David Oyelowo. This movie allows the new generation to rediscover this man who by his convictions became the hero of a whole population.
In conclusion, Martin Luther King is the example of ta realistic hero who stands out with his oratorical strength and his speeches fighting against the causes of racial segregation. His dream is realized during the election of Barack Obama, first black president of the United States, who joins in the lineage of the progress of the racial question in America. Beside as the British Prime Minister and novelist, Benjamin Disraeli writes :"The legacy of heroes is the memory of a great name and the inheritance of a great example".


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