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Bonsoir,Ma prof d'anglais nous à dmd de faire une lettre de motivation.Est-elle bien ? Merci de vos réponses

Capucine Martin
2 road fountain square
35430 St Father

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply to the job, of your association L214.
This job is the job of my dream,
I'm 19 years old,I have finish 1 years ago so I can work all the day,weeek-end and holidays ,day and night,except Saturday I am volunteer in R.S.P.C.A so i can't work this day.
I would enjoy work in L214 because die living conditions of animals is my priority.
I never work am full job but past year,I work all day in many job,I have reference.
I say this job is hard, but animal deserves.
Thank you for your time and attention
Sincerely
Capucine martin


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Bonsoir,
Plutôt pas mal
Capucine Martin
2 road fountain square
35430 St Father

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply to the job, of your association L214.
This job is the job of my dream,
I'm 19 years old,I have finished year ago so I can work all day long,week-end and holidays ,day and night,except on Saturday I am volunteer in R.S.P.C.A so I can't work this day.
I would enjoy work in L214 because animals' living conditions are my priority.
I never had a full-time job but past year,I worked all day in many jobs,I have references.
I say this job is hard, but animals deserve it(là perso, j'aurais mis "animals are worth it" (les animaux en valent le coup) mais tu fais comme tu veux ^^')
Thank you for your time and attention
Sincerely
Capucine martin

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