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Oral /Myths and Heroes

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I will talk about the concept of myths and heroes. A myth evokes the human condition as a whole, its history is often orally transmitted and played by a hero. A hero in mythology, is a person with superhuman qualities is admired for his courage and for his outstanding achievements . To illustrate this, I chose to focus my thoughts on successful careers of people , namely people who started from nothing to reach the top of the social ladder . How myths and heroes influence people's career? To answer this question , we will see the evolution of a life rags to riches which is a symbol of the American dream . Then we will see that political heroes could inspire the company as well.
First, there is no denying that the company is based on myths. As elsewhere, but even more the myths of "The American Dreams" in the United States are a prime example. Indeed, it promotes the idea that not only personal fulfillment is due to honesty, hard work, but it is based on the will of God. We have studied in class in an article from a website model which probably encouraged the American spirit of competitiveness, innovation and entrepreneurship; that is Oprah Winfrey. Oprah Winfrey overcame the obstacles of being a young African American girl in the South in the fifties and sixties to achieve his goal. She started her own show, which quickly became the talk show Oprah Winfrey. Its output was a tool to disseminate its principles influenced America. And the financing of its magazine, website and its own TV channel, she used her fame to base its charity and funded several houses and schools in South Africa. Therefore, it is a typical example of a self-made woman. Oprah Winfrey has climbed the social ladder as it had begun on the first level. Therefore, in all respects are based career throughout America.
Moreover, Mandela is a relevant illustration of the concept of hero, because it shows how one man changed the minds of people . Indeed , he put an end to decades of racial division and created a peaceful nation of peaceful rainbow sky. He was considered a symbol of goodness by spending his retirement years focused on charitable causes for children and the fight against AIDS. Through his tireless struggle for freedom and his insistence on forgiveness , Mandela has inspired millions in a spirit of reconciliation , including Barack Obama. The latter became the first black president of his country and won the Nobel Peace Prize , as Mandela. They are two examples of successful careers who approve egalitarianism to realize our dreams .
To put it in short, it seems to me that heroes influence the careers of people by their commitment to defend and promote honorable values ​​and strong personalities. However, even if you can get some inspiration from mystical stories and iconic figures , at the end , you have to face reality.


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I will talk about the concept of myths and heroes. A myth evokes the human condition as a whole, its history is often orally transmitted and played by a hero. A hero in mythology, is a person with superhuman qualities who is admired for his courage and outstanding achievements.
To illustrate this, I chose to focus my thoughts on people who have had successful careers, namely people who started from nothing to reach the top of the social ladder . How do myths and heroes influence people's career? To answer this question , we will see the evolution of a life rags to riches which is a symbol of the American dream . Then we will see that political heroes could inspire the company as well. 
First, there is no denying that the company (not sure which company you are referring to) is based on myths. As elsewhere, but even more the myths of "The American Dreams" in the United States are a prime example (try expressing your ideas using simple sentences....The  American dream is a prime example of a myth). Indeed, it promotes the idea that not only personal fulfillment is due to honesty, hard work, but it is based on the will of God. We have studied in class in an article from a website model which probably encouraged the American spirit of competitiveness, innovation and entrepreneurship; that is "Oprah Winfrey" (you've inverted the sentence and can easily lose the meaning). Oprah Winfrey overcame the obstacles of being a young African American girl in the South in the fifties and sixties to achieve her goal. She started her own show, which quickly became the talk show "|Oprah Winfrey." Its output was a tool to disseminate its principles influenced America. And the financing of its magazine, website and its own TV channel, she used her fame to base its charity and funded several houses and schools in South Africa. Therefore, she is a typical example of a self-made woman. Oprah Winfrey has climbed the social ladder as it had begun on the first level. Therefore, in all respects are based career throughout America.(revise the sentences to make better sense)
Moreover (not appropriately used) Mandela is a relevant illustration of the concept of a hero, because it shows how one man changed the minds of people . Indeed , he put an end to decades of racial division and created a peaceful nation in peaceful rainbow sky. He was considered a symbol of goodness by spending his retirement years focused on charitable causes for children and the fight against AIDS. Through his tireless struggle for freedom and his insistence on forgiveness , Mandela has inspired millions in a spirit of reconciliation , including Barack Obama. The latter became the first black president of his country and won the Nobel Peace Prize , as Mandela. They are two examples of successful careers who approve egalitarianism to realize our dreams .
To put it in short, it seems to me that heroes influence the careers of people by their commitment to defend and promote honorable values ​​and strong personalities. However, even if you can get some inspiration from mystical stories and iconic figures , at the end , you have to face reality (specify concerning the reality)

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