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Bonjour pour demain je doit écrire un texte en anglais sur un souvenir de mon enfance et en expliquer les conséquence qu'il ont eu sur mon futur, je l'ai écrit mais je ne sais pas si il y a des fautes ou si je l'ai bien mit au passé pouvez vous me corriger ?
Merci !

In my childwood I remember a trip in London with my mother, my father and my brother during a week.
We had taken the Ferry, when i was arrived I have found English peoplestrange because they didn't speak my language.
I had loved this trip and I had loved the english culture too !
Since I was return in France I do my best to learn English and for speack well English For I hope go in England again.
My mother have promised to me that if I had my Brevet I will go to London so I hope had my brevet.


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I remember a trip in London with my mother, my father and my brother when I was a child. 
when I arrived*  / I found* / I've loved*
When I came back to France, I tried to do my best to learn english and to speak well english, and I hope I could go in the UK again.
My mother promised me* / so I hope i'll have my "brevet"
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During my childhood, I remember a trip in London with my parents and my brother during one week.
We took the Ferry, when i arrived I found English poeple strange because they didn't speak my language.
I loved this trip and I loved the english culture too !
Since I returned in France I did my best to learn English and for speak well English.
For i hope go in England again.
My mothr promised to me that if had my Brevet I will go to London so I hope have my brevet.
( l'auxiliaire avoir/être est supprimé, il est remplacé par -ed si c'est un verbe régulier, si c'est un verbe irrégulier (exemple take devient took) 
(So I hope have my brevet, pas So I hope had my brevet sinon ça devient : J'éspere que j'ai eut mon brevet, il vaut mieux dire, j'espere avoir mon brevet.)
Bon courage !!
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