Bonjour, j'ai un travail à faire en Anglais, mais je ne sais pas si j'ai fais des fautes. Pouvez-vous me dire si il y en a ? :
« Dear Mr Robert Frenette,
Sorry I didn't write sooner, but it's very important...
My name is Jessica, I'm a pupil from France and I'm in 9th Grade. I'm writing to you because my friend is a victim of bullying. Her name is Jody and she is also in 9th Grade. She has been fighting against verbal bullying and also against physical bullying. It happened from 6th Grade.
At lunch time, a few of the girls keeps calling her names, at first I thought it was a joke because we were laughing. Sometimes they punch, kick and throw hot chocolate down him... What should I do ?
She was bullied at school! " A group of girls would drag me around the playground" , Jody says. " I got my head smacked on the wall."
The violence got so bad... I don't know how to help my friend....
Jody feels very sad, upset, lonely. She started cutting herself recently. She goes on and on that she hates her life and wishes she was never born. I dont want her to be sad... I want the bullying stop as soon as possible, so please help her.
Thanks for reading, See you soon!
Jessica. »
Merci de me dire si il y a des fautes et dites vos avis sur la lettre aussi :)