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Bonjour , je dois faire une rédaction en anglais sur les robots , j'ai commencé merci de me corriger et de m'aider pour faire d'autre phrase car je n'ai plus d'inspiration merci d'avance je dois faire (350 mots)
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I Am writing today to talk about robots which exist since 2010.
Nowadays, there are many people that are buying robots for their own confort.
It's the new technology.
First of all, I have a big robot, his name is Tony.
My robot is very young. It is very mature, intelligent,fulfilled, pessimistic and precocious.
It is really beneficial because it can take pictures, it can read your messages, it can talk to you and it can do many things.
They have multitasking and they keep company. They are time-saving!
On the other hand, it can be rebel if it works to much so it can be dangerous. Moreover, it uses a lot of electricity. From my point of view, it is very helpful, useful, necessary and efficient especially for the big families.
It is not just a robot, it is a member of your family !
I suggest you to buy a robot on the Web because it is less expensive.
In 2025, there will be more and more robots everywhere in the world.
To my mind, it is very important to develop many robots especially for helping the disabled people and old people.

We can wonder if robots will replace us in the generations that will follow ?

Experts believe that robots can take over 47% of jobs that is to say Artificial Intelligence, automating, computers and many other things again.
They think also masses of people will be unemployed.
We must find a solution because the robots gradually begin to destroy humans with their knowledge.
Robots will be human beings in the future which is very bad because robots do not fell anything.


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If I’m writing today it is to talk about the robots that have existed since 2010.
Nowadays, many people buy robots for their own comfort.
It is the progress of the new technologies!

Personally, I have a big robot whose name is Tony.
It is very young and very mature, as well as intelligent, fulfilled, pessimistic and precocious.
It is really useful for me and my family as it can take photos, read our messages, talk to us and do many other things!

Robots in a more global way, are multitasking, a good company for humans and time-saving!
But sometimes they aren’t as great as that. Indeed, they can be rebellious if we ask them too much and can even become dangerous. Moreover, they use a lot of electricity.

From my point of view, it is very helpful, useful, necessary and efficient especially for the big families.

A robot isn’t only a machine or anything like that, it is a member of your family!

I suggest you to buy a robot on the Web because it is less expensive.

In 2025, there will be more and more robots everywhere in the world.

For me, it is very important to develop the robots’ technology especially for helping the disabled and old people.

We can wonder if robots will replace us in the generations that will follow?

Experts believe that robots can take over 47% of jobs (that is to say Artificial Intelligence, automating, computers and many other things again -> ne veut rien dire)

They also think that many people will be unemployed.

We must find a solution because the robots begin little by little to destroy humans with their knowledges.

Robots will be human beings in the future which is very bad because robots do not feel anything. (ça ne veut rien dire un robot reste un robot, il ne peut pas devenir un être humain…)


I am writing today to talk about robots which have existed since 2010. Nowadays, there are many people who are buying robots for their own comfort. It's the technology of the new age. 

First of all, I have a big robot, his name is Tony. My robot is very young. It is very mature, intelligent, optimistic, and precautious. It is really useful because it can take pictures, it can read your messages, it can talk to you directly, and it can do many other things. 

Robots are capable of multitasking and they keep company. They are very time-saving! 
On the other hand, they can be rebellious if it works too much so they could be dangerous. Moreover, it uses a lot of electricity. From my point of view, they are very helpful, useful, necessary, efficient especially for big families. A robot is not a machine, it is a member of your family!

I suggest you to buy a robot on the Internet because it is cheaper nowadays.
In 2025, there will be more and more robots in the world. 
In my opinion, it is very important to develop many robots especially to help the disabled and elderly. 

We wonder if robots will replace us in the generations that follow?

Experts believe that robots can take over 47% of current jobs, that is to say by Artificial Intelligence like automating robots, computers, and many other things like those. They also think masses of people will be unemployed.  We must find a solution because robots will gradually begin to destroy humans with their superior knowledge and logical reasoning. Robots will be the new dominant species of the future which is very bad because robots do not fall for anything.
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