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Bonjour,
voici ma synthèse d'anglais dont la notion est "espaces et échanges", est ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger les fautes en sachant que j'ai beaucoup de lacunes en anglais...
Merci d'avance

Today I am going to deal with the notion spaces and exchanges. An exchange is a movement or circulation. All type of exchanges : people like immigration, trade, media, communication… While a space is the geographical area defined by borders.
To illustrate this notion I will talk about the different waves in America since the nineteenth century.
This leads me to wonder why did people immigrate to the USA ?
So fist I will reflect on the history and the causes of immigration, then we will talk about the motivations of people to immigrate to the USA. And finally I will tackle the consequences of immigration to the USA.


To begin with the history of immigration, determining the causes. The beginning of immigration began during the sixtennth century after discovery of Christophe Colomb. The european settled on the east coast. Then began the slavery by millions of West Africans were forced to come in USA to work on sugar and cotton plantations. The slavery allowed to make rich countries as France, Spain, Britain. It’s the beginning of immigration. Next, they are different waves of immigration. More exactly third as indicate the document « Waves of immigration to the US » who is an oral comprehension. While the ninetennth century , the Europeans suffer of stravation, beacause of potato failure especially Nothern Europe as Irish. After the death of many people, the Irish begin to immigrate to USA. They will become factory workers and the will be contribute to develop the country. Amercia become « Amercia land », because more and more people immigrate to Amercia because she was seen as « The Promised land ». They are a lot of work, and the people think to have better living conditions with prospects. They believe that they will live Amercian Dream. Most people who immigrate are poor, they want to strat from scratch. But some immigrate por other reasons. To illustrate this idea i would refer to a text taken from « Lations : crossing borderlands ». It’s a grirl Josseline who have 14 years old, and with her brother, they want to go in Los Angeles because their mother is there. So they start a long travel, he is dangerous. But Josseline fall sick during the travel. We can think that Josseline dies before she find her mother. It shows that the people immigrate for other reasons. Than more, it shows that the travel is very long and dangerous. So there is surely a lot of people who died.



One last aspect is that of consequences of immigration. The people think it’s the best solution to immigrate to America. They believe to Amercia is « The promised land », that they find a job, to have a better life. But it’s not a reality, it’s just a dream. The document 1 who is a picture show the reality. The migrants make a job that most amercians would be unwilling to do. Futhermore, they are low-paid, the have hardly enough to live. In the picture the migrants seem tired. The song written by Bruce Springsteen « Amercian land » shows the consequences of immigration. This sing tell the story of a man who immigrated to America. He thinks that he will live in the best of the world and all people culde be free and equal. But he will surely happen the opposite. Then he will find in dire straits. However,The migrants will be used as manworker. And they will permit to build the country as we tell the song « « Tey died builiding the railroads, they died in the fields and factories ». The immigration has been beneficial for the Amercia, the country has been able to develop. She permited that Amercia become the fisrt world power.




To conclude, the immigration to America has been positive and negative consequences. On the one hand, the migrants have been influenced by dream, the ideas. On the other hand, Amercia become rich economically and culturally. We have a lot of testimony who tells that migrants have endured. We can to connect the immigration to America with the immigration who happens in Europe.


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Hello
In my opinion :
Today, I am going to talk about spaces and exchanges.
An exchange is a movement or circulation, by example for people we can find immigration, trade, media, communication…
A space is a geographical area limited by borders. 
To illustrate these notions, I will talk about the different waves in America since the nineteenth century.
At first, I wonder why people have immigrated to the USA .
To begin, I will reflect on the history and the causes of immigration, then I will talk about people motivations. Finally, I will tackle the consequences of this immigration.

What are the  immigration causes? The immigration began during the sixteenth century after the discovery of Christophe Colomb. European people lived on the east coast. Then the slavery began. Several millions of West Africans were forced to come in USA to work on sugar and cotton plantations.
The slavery allowed to make rich countries as France, Spain, Britain. It was the beginning of immigration. Later, there have been different waves of immigration. More exactly three,  as indicates the document « Waves of immigration to the US » who is an oral comprehension
While the nineteenth century , the Europeans suffered of privation, because of potato lack, especially in Northern Europe as Ireland.
After the death of many people, the Irish began to immigrate to USA. They will become factory workers and they will contribute to develop the country. America became then « America land », because more and more people immigrated , the country was seen as « The Promise land ».
There were a lot of work, and people thought to have better living conditions with prospects. They believed that they would live American Dream. Most people who immigrated were poor, they wanted to avoid the scratch. But some immigrated for other reasons.
To illustrate this idea, I would refer to a text from « Lations : crossing borderlands ». It’s the story of a girl, Josseline, who was 14 years old, and with her brother, they wanted to go in Los Angeles because their mother was already there.
So they started a long and dangerous travel, and Josseline fell sick during it. We can think that Josseline died before she found her mother. This text shows that the people immigrated for other reasons. Furthermore, it shows that the travel was very long and dangerous. So there were surely a lot of people who died in these conditions.
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