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Among the most famous Inuit myths is the legend of the sea goddess, Sedna. The legend of how Sedna became is told throughout the Arctic. The story varies from one region to the next. However, in all versions, a young woman becomes the mother of all sea creatures.

Sedna was a very pretty girl. Sedna was vain, she spent her days to brush her pretty brown hair. She was desired by many men who wish to marry her.

As she was very demanding, she always refused their advances. One day his father declared that the next man who presented himself to take the hand of his daughter would get it. Sedna had no choice

The next day a richly dressed hunting man presented himself, and married Sedna. So she left with this man becoming her husband, on an island where he lived. Shortly afterwards, it turned out that this hunter was a living shaman most of the time under the appearance of a bird

Sedna was very unhappy and spent her time crying. Her father heard her and decided to go and get her. One day, while the shaman was gone, Sedna's father took his kayak and went to get it back. When the shaman was back and he noticed his wife's absence, he entered a terrible rage and started a gigantic storm on the ocean.

Sedna and her father were still aboard their kayaks and were caught in this terrible storm. The father immediately understood what was happening, and threw his daughter out of the boat to escape this shaman.

Her daughter tried to get involved in the kayak but in vain, her father struck with her paddle on her daughter's fingers, and the girl's fingers broke and fell into the water, they became the fish of the ocean . Sedna let herself sink into this icy water where she transformed herself into a pretty sea-deze.