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Bonjour, je dois rédiger une lettre en anglais. La consigne est : you are one of the immigrants ant you settled in London one month ago. Writre a letter to your family in the Carribean.
- Tell the about the crossing and your arrival.
- Insist on your feelings.
- Give them news : What are you doing ? Where do you live ? How do you fell?
- Tell them what you miss from home.
Pouvez vous vérifier si ce que j'ai fais est juste ? Merci

Dear Mom,

It's been one month since I arrived in London because of th Windrush. The crossing was long and cold because of the wind. The boat rocked and I was afraid of this.
I arrived in the early morning and the sun was getting up. That was so spectacular and I was dazzled.

So now I am a cashier at a grocery store and I make enough money to rent an apartment and feed me. I live in the district of immigrating with others immigrants from around the world and Carribbean. That is very cool and funny. I feel good here, but I miss you so much that I feel a space in my heart.

Of course, my brothers and my sister miss me a lot. The house and the pets miss me also.
I promise you that I will come see you soon. And I am going to save up some money for you, Sar, Alexis, Mickael can come in London.

I love you

Give my love to the rest of the family


Your daughter


Répondre :

A month*
Was afraid* sinon tu dois préciser pourquoi elle avais peur
Sun was rising* c'est plus anglais
Feed myself*
Feel a hole in my heart* pas la même chose qu'en français
I miss my brothers and sisters a lot. I also miss the house and the pets.* je pense que c'est ce que tu voulais dire
To come to London*
Tell the rest of the family I love them*
Voilà