Bonjour, j'ai repéré déjà quelques fautes: après la question We may wonder... c'est then pas than.
First of all i’m going to
talk about the music revoltution in the 60’s and than , i’m going to talk about
the women’s lib movement , and the difference between the idea of progress of
the 60 s and now.
(les flèches veulent dire correction) --> First of all, I'm going to talk about music revolution in the 60's. We will then move on to women's lib movement, and conclude with difference of 60's ideas and ideas from the contemporaly world.
