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Bonjour , pourriez vous m'indiquez , s'il vous plait , des fautes de vocabulaire ou mal formulation de phrases ... bref toutes les erreurs dans le texte suivant en anglais conjugué au prétérit
ACTE 1:

John Cena did an open challenge , Mohamed Ali accepted the challenge . After a match very violent , Cena won with his Attitude Adjustement Cena welcomes Ali beacause was a good opponent . But Donald Trump came in the ring and he said « The black people didn’t knew how to fight !>> John and Mohamed was very furious and Ali to fighted Trump . Donald cried and John with Mohamed laughed .


ACTE 2 :

Homer Simpson watched all and he laughed out . The next day Homer went to the cinema to watched the new horror moovie ” ça ” . But the cinema was empty . The film started at 2:00 pm . In the middle of the film Homer was scared . Waw! Ho ! my god ! Homer ate 158 donuts , he was very greedy ! Shortly before the end , the lights went off. He thought that it was a power failure . But he
perceived ça in the back of the room !!! So he was scared to death , ça approched to Homer . Homer tried to hid under a seat , impossible he was too big! Now , ça was next to Homer , and he held a knife , Homer knew what awaits him , but suddenly Homer throwed up on the head of ça . Blinded by vomit , he released its flashlight and Homer happy for this accident he took the flashlight and ran to the exit . Homer was very afraid it’s beacause that it no longer goes out of the TV !!!


Merci a ceux qui répondront a mon aide .


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woill it be possible to get the whole text in french because this version is quite a direct translation from french and thus while translating the meaning of the phrase may completely change to the points that you want to show.
""John Cena did an open challenge , Mohamed Ali accepted the challenge . After a  very violent match, Cena won with his Attitude Adjustement Cena welcomes Ali because was a good opponent . But Donald Trump came on the ring and said « The black people don’t know how to fight !>> John and Mohamed were very furious and wanted to fight with Trump . Donald cried and John with Mohamed laughed.