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Bonjour demain j'ai une description d'un super héros a faire et a dire devant les élèves j'ai choisi Bat-Girl et pouvais vous me corriger je suis en 6e .

My Favorite super-heroine is Bat-Girl

Her name is Angelina . She is 19 years old . She is from New-York . She is American . She has got long straight black hair and green eyes . She has got a small nose and a round face . She is not very tall but really strong because she love basketball and ski but she hates football.Her mother's name is Katty and his father's name is Mike . She has got a little brother his name is Tom . She has got one cat "Happy" . She hates apple and cheese but she loves pasta , hamburger, and milk . Her costume is black.She is very popular because she can save people.She can fly . She is invincible and phenomenal

Voila MERCI D'AVANCE

Et a votre avis je rajoute des choses pour le costume ?

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NATHEAVIZ

Bonjour

je corrige au mieux ton texte et supprime pas mal de répétitions (she is, she has got...)

My favourite super-heroine is Bat-Girl.

Her real name is Angelina. She is an american nineteen years old girl (living in) from New-York. She has got long black straight hair and a small nose in her round face. She is not very tall but she's really strong because she loveS basketball and skiing. But she hates playing football. Her mother's name is Katty and her father's name is Tom. She has got a little brother whose name is Tom. She has also got a cat called "Happy". She hates appleS and cheese but she loves pasta, hamburgerS and milk. Her costume is black. She is very popular because she saveS people. She has different skills (talent, compétence, si tu as appris) : she can fly, she is invincible and phenomenal (increbible).

Il se peut que je t'aie trop changé le texte avec des choses non-apprises.

En ce cas garde le tien mais n'oublie pas le s à "she loveS basketball...." et on dit she is an american girl from New York ou living in New York.

whose = dont (si tu ne l'as pas appris, ne recopie pas et garde ton texte

Je crois comprendre que tes leçons portent sur "have got". Fais pour le mieux en te servant éventuellement de mes notes.

Bonne journée :)

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