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the racial segregation

The racial segregation is a following of the American civil war. The racial segregation lasts 92 years. It’s a dark period of the history of the Unites States.
During it the black people was put aside the society. They couldn’t get married with white people. The children didn’t go to the same school that the white people. They were obliged to sit down of the back of the bus. They didn’t drink at the same water dispenser, they have to go in restaurant do for them, go to the beach for “colored persons” This was a law named Jim Crow.





The December 1st of 1955 Rosa Parks a black American woman sits on the places reserved to the white people in the bus. To have made it she was judged and had a fine of 15 dollars. She was born on February 4th on 1913 and dead October 24th of 2005. Following it Martin Luther decided to do a boycott of the bus of Montgomery. The boycott was pacific. During three thousand and eighty one day any black person took the bus. Following it the constitution decides of delete the Jim Crow’s Law but they keep being applied. So Martin Luther King does a lot of speech about it. He was supported by John F. Kennedy. He said her famous speech the 15th January of 1929 “I have a dream” in front of the Lincoln memorial during the walking for the work and freedom. Where he shows his desire and his hope of a brotherly and without distinction United States. He was assassin the same day of the walking for the black freedom by a ball in the jaw. It was a white people who wanted keep the segregation.
There was too Malcolm X it was a preacher Muslim and afro-American. He is known for defending the black people during the racial segregation.


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Bonjour,

pour moi tu as fait un très bon travail, je trouve qu'il n'y a rien à changer ou bien rajouter.

Bravo pour ton travail.

lenatd2005