Bonjour, j'espère que vous allez bien ! J'aurai besoin d'aide pour une rédaction en anglais. Je n'ai pas d'inspiration et pour couronnée le tout je suis très faible en anglais.

Alors déjà voilà le sujet : Building loyal relationships is a long-term approach to more rapid growth and higher profitability for companies. Do you agree or not ?

Ensuite, voilà ce que j'ai commencé à faire :
Yes, I agree with this statement. Indeed, the establishment of relationships of trust with customers provides a high return on time. Loyal customers who buy more and regularly have a low cost of selling but will often recommend to others the company they trust.
I think that to maintain a relationship of trust you have to understand the needs of customers, provide good service, and do everything to improve customer loyalty.
As a result, if the customer can identify with the business, he or she will feel good and will be much more likely to remain loyal to the business. However, for this to happen, the company must create a coherent and clearly defined identity but above all it must be able to provide consistently high levels of customer service.