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- What will I wear tomorrow?
No one really asks the question anymore!
Now what we think is "What are the other people wearing?" "What's the fashion these days?" "What will they think of my outfit?" When you want to do your hair, you wonder "What is the most common hairdo, how other people do their hair". The truth is that no one has an opinion about their body or their mind anymore. The truth is that what we are is based on other people. Other people guide us and leave our personality far from us. We all wear jeans, because almost everyone wears jeans. We wear jeans because we would be looked at badly and mocked if we wore something else. If what I wear is different from others, if what I say is different from others, then I will be laughed at. If I don't have the same brand of clothes, phone, hair or mentality as the others, then I will be classified as different. The whole world wants to put us in boxes. And if we go beyond that box, then, for them, we are different.
Well, if that's what it means to be different, I think I'm different and I think, deep down, we're all different. Because to be normal, there would have to be a model of normality, but there isn't, so I'm different. I'm different from you, from him, from her. And it doesn't matter to be different. What is serious is to be different from yourself. I don't want to enter in a box, but in our world, I have to enter it to find a job, friends, to be accepted into a group. So the only way is to break these boxes. There is no normality, the difference exists only according to them. And I don't need to be normal to them anymore, for me, they've gone blind. I'm not normal, I'm not different, I'm just me and it's already a lot




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- What am I going to wear tomorrow?

No one really asks the question anymore!

Now what matters to us is"What are other people wearing?" "What's the fashion these days?" "what do they think of my outfit?". And also when you want to do your hair, you wonder "What is the most common hairdo, how other people do their hair".

The truth is that no one has the confidence for their body or their mind anymore.

And another gospel truth is that we are based on other people. Other people lead us and take our personality far from us.

Now we all wear jeans, because almost everyone wears it and also we be dressed in it because we would be looked bad and mocked if we wore something else. And If I don't have the same brand of clothes, phone, hair or mentality as the others, then I will be classified as a different human.

The whole world wants to put us in boxes. And if we go beyond that box, then, for them, we are dissimilar.

Well, if that what it means to be different, I think I'm am and I think, deep down, we're all different. Because to be normal, there would have to be a model of normality, but there isn't, so I'm not like them. I'm divergent from you, from him, from her and from everyone. And it doesn't matter to be different. What is serious is to be different from yourself. I don't want to enter in a box, but in our world, I have to be distinct just to find a job, friends, to be accepted into a group. So the only way is to break these New rules. There is no normality, the difference exists only according to them. And I don't need to be normal to them anymore, for me, they've gone blind. I'm not normal, I'm not different, I'm just me and it's already a lot and enough.

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