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bonjour j'ai un DM a rendre pour lundi et le sujet est le suivant : explain in 30lines Why the cost of university is a real issue in UK ?
je voudrais juste savoir si ma formulation est bonne et si il y'a des fautes d’orthographes merci !!

ma réponse est la suivante :

The rise of tuittion fees represent a real issue in united kingdom and the opinion is divided between those who think that it is a great thing and the others who are against.

For me the cost of university is a real issue because it will cause first discrimination.
Effectively people who have less financial means won't be able to achieve their academic objective.
Furthermore some students will have to work during their study in order to get a return on their investment and others will be forced to have a debt if they want to obtain their degree.
So the cost of university will cause an inequality between the wealthier who will benefit a better degree and the poorer who will have degrees of little value.

Also Emilie speaks about the social problems that the rise of tuittion fees will create.
According to her diversity of people in university will be reduced and they will not have social mobility.
University will become a place where students will come from the same social clases.
To finish degree will represent a symbol of money instead of a symbol of people's effort, commitment and hard work

In conclusion we can say that the cost of university is a real issue because it will cause discrimination, they will not have diversity in university and also degrees will become a symbol of money instead of people's effort and hard work.



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C'est:The rise of tuition fees represents a real issue in United Kingdom. The opinion on this subject is divided between those who think that it is a great thing and the others who are against it. 
For me the cost of university is a real issue because it will cause discrimination.
In fact, people who have less money won't be able to achieve their academic objective.
Furthermore some students will have to work during their study in order to get a return on their investment and others will be forced to be in debt if they want to obtain their degree.
So the cost of university will cause an inequality between the wealthier who will benefit a better degree and the poorer who will have degrees of little value.

Also, Emilie speaks about the social problems that the rise of tuittion fees will create.
According to her, diversity of people in university will be reduced and they will not have social mobility.
The university will become a place where students will come from the same social clases.
To finish a degree will represent a symbol of money instead of the symbol of people's effort, their commitment and their hard work

In conclusionm we can say that the cost of university is a real issue nowadays, because it causes a variety of problems; like discrimination, less diversity of persons, and the change of peoples hard work won't be seen in their degree.