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Bonjour est-ce que quelqu'un peut corriger mes fautes svp ?
Ladies and gentleman, members of the jury... Want to see Hillary Clinton to win ?
For exemple, some arguments against.... Trump !

For me, considers Trump as too insulting toward Hispanics, Muslims and women and that he has no style, which doesn't fit a representative of the USA abroad. He also uses inappropriate language. I don't like the personality of the men.
Somebody who thinks Trump manipulating desperate people and that he's a liar and will not keep his promises. He's just exploiting people's despair. I do not think less.
I think he has recently been accuses of sexual harassment toward many women an even of sex abuse, is this good for a man who wants to be president in the United States?
Trump is a former prisoner who used to be on death-row and whose innocence was once proved by a DNA test.
VOTE FOR HILLARY CLINTON.
Finally, I think that a woman would not be who disapproves of taking such a male-chauvinist and woman-hater to the position of president.

It was been a great honour, talking to you tonight, thank you very much, and CLINTON PRESIDENT !

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TOHRUVIZ
Dans ta phrase "i do not think less" cela serais mieux "i don't ..."
KOUSUKEVIZ
Hillary clinton win (on enlève le "to" obligatoirement et tu peux même faire "clinton's win" pour dire "la victoire de ..." je trouve personnellement que ça sonne mieux)example*
For me / I consider ; Il faut choisir entre les deux
Trump as too = Trump is too
and that he has ; tu peux enlever le "that"of the man = of this man
Somebody who thinks ; tu peux enlever le "who"Trump is* manipulating
that ; répétition non nécessaire
he's a liar and will not ; remplace le "and" par "who" et remplace "will not" par "won't
"exploiting" ; je pense que "using" serait plus approprié mais comme tu veux honnêtement
Je pense d'ailleurs que ton "I do not think less" est solennel et correspond bien au contexte. Encore une fois; c'est juste personnel
he has recently been accused*
petit oubli de frappe au "and" ;)
"Do you want the president of the United States to be a man like that" exprimerait mieux ton idée je pense. Après, si tu veux rester sur ta phrase : president in the ; president of the
Ta phrase sur le test ADN, j'ai pas trop compris en quoi c'est un argument contre si il est prouvé qu'il est innocent ?
a woman would disapprove taking* ou encore "a woman would not approve" ou pour reprendre ta formule au maximum "A woman would not be the one who disapproves voting against such a [...]"
misogynist passerait mieux que "woman-hater" je pense
It was / It has been ; Il faut choisir x)

Very good text :p
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