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NEIRINVIZ
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Bonjour je voudrais savoir si mon texte est correcte en anglais

This cartoon is good but don't show every aspects of Facebook privacy problems.
For example , it's don't talk about Facebook privacy and who Can see you're picture or private informations.
It may also be a problem from the parents who give too much liberty to their children.
If parents pay more attention of what's their children were doing on internet , it will be safer

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ABDERRAOUFSLAMANIVIZ
bounjour!!
This cartoon is good but don't (doesn't) show every aspects of Facebook privacy problems.
For example , it's don't (it doesn't) talk about Facebook privacy and who Can see you're picture or private informations.
It may also be a problem from (for) the parents who give too much liberty to their children.
If parents pay more attention of what's their children were doing (of what their children are doing) on internet , it will be safer.
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