Bonjour
je vais essayer de corriger sans trop changer ton texte
Hello everybody !
Today I would like to talk about racism. Racism is known all around the world. It is something quite serious because a lot of people are concerned.
For example racism is when a white person treats another person badly because a different color of skin, as a black person.
Today racism is widespread around the world (déjà dit plus haut ...)
Martin Luther King said in his famous speech : " I have a dream that one day my little children will live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin.." I would like to add, because they don't try to know each other. People who think that way are really uncaring... They have no heart. (ou = they are heartless)
I have a dream ........ NO ! I have a solution. Racism must be prohibited. How ? Everyone being offfended should tell the police because, to me, it's a crime.
Behind me (je suis pas sûr de comprendre ... je laisse comme ça .. /ou/ "Around me" = Autour de moi ..??) many persons were victims of racism; they became depressed ( they had nervous breakdowns). They told me what happened two days after they went to the police, and guess what ? The police didn't do anything .. I want these people to go to jail because racist people don't have to do this.
My speech is over (= finished) , but if someone wants to come to talk to me, you are welcome (si tu préfères = they can ask for an appointment ... ça fait un peu formel...)
Goodbye /ou/ Bye everyone and thank you for listening to me.
je suis désolé si j'ai "un peu trop" changé ton texte ... J'ai vraiment dû changer cetaines tournures de phrases...
Juste UNE chose ... pour dire LE racisme, on dit juste "racism" pas "the" racism .....
Ton texte est très beau, bonne chance
Bonne journée :)
